Nah I can't do these short games, it's just not my thing. What I should do is work is work a bunch of them together into something larger, thats a better idea I think. I wrote a good little story in response this thread, but I feel like it should be expanded into something bigger or it's not worth publishing.
I'm glad you made something cool whether or not it's for this I find I bog myself down in big ideas so easily it's good for me to just have an idea and bring it to fruition before time has it's way with it.
it's harder than I expected to find a good program to do this in, but it looks like if you wrangle it enough renpy will do it, though my game might end up half visual novel half adventure game
Is it any good? Iv'e tried twine, one thing that bothered me with twine though is the documentation that comes with it isn't good, it expects you to go online to find information, but I find that kinda annoying, mainly because often I don't have internet access, but I still think programs should come with decent documentation.